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editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/howtos/Upgrading.tid

@@ -25,7 +25,8 @@ This process will work on most desktop browsers. Note that none of your personal
 
 # Drag your old TiddlyWiki HTML file into the browser window
 #* If the file is encrypted you will be prompted for the password
-# Review the list of tiddlers that will be upgradedck ''Upgrade''
+# Review the list of tiddlers that will be upgraded
+# Click ''Upgrade''
 # Save changes to save the new version
 
 This will download a file called ''upgrade.html'' to your computer. This file is the upgrade of your old file. You may need to open the location where ''upgrade.html'' was downloaded, rename ''upgrade.html'' with the name of the old file you are upgrading, and replace the old file by moving the new file in its place.
@@ -36,6 +37,8 @@ You can also download http://tiddlywiki.com/upgrade.html locally and perform the
 
 ! Problems with Upgrades
 
+!! Firefox Security Restrictions
+
 In case you run into this error with the upgrader, upon confirming the upgrade selection :
 
 <<<
@@ -44,12 +47,14 @@ Error while saving:
 Error:NS_ERROR_DOM_BAD_URI: Access to restricted URI denied
 <<<
 
-* The upgrading script triggers a security restriction in Firefox, we suggest using Chrome instead until this can be resolved.<br><br>
+The upgrade operation falls foul of a security restriction in Firefox. Until this can be resolved, we suggest either using the offline upgrader, or using Chrome to perform the upgrade:
 
-*# Use Chrome to open http://tiddlywiki.com/upgrade.html, then drag your local TiddlyWiki html file to be upgraded into the upgrader window, as described above in ''Online upgrading''.<br><br>
-*#After you've saved your upgraded file, you should be able to open it in Firefox and [[save using TiddlyFox|Saving with TiddlyFox]] again.<br><br>  
+*# Use Chrome to open http://tiddlywiki.com/upgrade.html, then drag your local TiddlyWiki html file to be upgraded into the upgrader window, as described above in ''Online upgrading''
+*# After you've saved your upgraded file, you should be able to open it in Firefox and [[save using TiddlyFox|Saving with TiddlyFox]] again
 * //See also : [[Saving on TiddlySpot]]//
 
+!! Incompatible Customisations
+
 It is possible for a customisation applied in a previous version to break when upgraded to the latest version. There are two techniques you can use to help track down issues:
 
 * Try repeating the upgrade having selectively unchecked any tiddlers that may be applying customisations to TiddlyWiki

editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/saving/Saving on TiddlySpot.tid

@@ -21,6 +21,7 @@ Note that your password is sent unencrypted when using TiddlySpot. From http://f
 
 No. Tiddlyspot does not use SSL/https. Your password is sent in clear text when uploading and when authenticating to access a private site. This means that your Tiddlyspot is vulnerable to packet sniffing and your password could be discovered by a malicious third party. Also your data is transmitted unencrypted when you view your site, even if it is a private site. For this reason please don't put sensitive information such as banking details in your Tiddlyspot and don't use a password that you use for other high security sites.
 <<<
+
 ! Problems with saving on TiddlySpot
 
 In case you run into this error when uploading a new or freshly upgraded local TiddlyWiki to TiddlySpot :
@@ -31,13 +32,11 @@ Error while saving:
 Error:NS_ERROR_DOM_BAD_URI: Access to restricted URI denied
 <<<
 
-* The upgrading script triggers a security restriction in Firefox, we suggest using Chrome instead until this can be resolved.<br><br>
+The upgrade operation falls foul of a security restriction in Firefox. Until this can be resolved, we suggest using Chrome.
 
-*# Use Chrome to open the local TiddlyWiki document you want to upload to TiddlySpot and follow the steps 1 through 5 described above..<br><br>
-
-*# Once you've checked the TiddlySpot-hosted TiddlyWiki loads properly in Chrome, you should be able to access, edit and [[save using TiddlyFox|Saving with TiddlyFox]] again.<br><br>  
-
-* After you've uploaded your local document once, further editing and saving of the online version hosted on TiddlySpot should work with any modern browser of your choice.<br><br>  
-** Don't forget to fill in the TiddlySpot wikiname and password in your TiddlySpot TiddlyWiki control panel for any new browser you want to save changes with !<br><br>
+*# Use Chrome to open the local TiddlyWiki document you want to upload to TiddlySpot and follow the steps 1 through 5 described above
+*# Once you've checked the TiddlySpot-hosted TiddlyWiki loads properly in Chrome, you should be able to access, edit and [[save using TiddlyFox|Saving with TiddlyFox]] again
+* After you've uploaded your local document once, further editing and saving of the online version hosted on TiddlySpot should work with any modern browser of your choice.
+** Don't forget to fill in the TiddlySpot wikiname and password in your TiddlySpot TiddlyWiki control panel for any new browser you want to use for saving changes
 
 * //See also : [[Upgrading]]//