minor fixes post review

docs/editor_manual/documents_images_snippets/images.rst

@@ -8,12 +8,22 @@ If you want to edit, add or remove images from the CMS outside of the individual
 * Clicking an image will allow you to edit the data associated with it. This includes the Alt text, the photographers credit, the medium of the subject matter and much more. 
 
 .. Warning:: 
-	changing the alt text here will alter it for all occurrences of the image in carousels, but not in inline images, where the alt text can be set separately.
+	Changing the alt text here will alter it for all occurrences of the image in carousels, but not in inline images, where the alt text can be set separately.
 
 .. image:: ../../_static/images/screen32_image_edit_page.png
 
+Changing the image
+__________________
+
 * When editing an image you can replace the file associated with that image record. This means you can update images without having to update the pages on which they are placed. 
 
 .. Warning::
 	Changing the file will change it on all pages that use the image.
 
+Focal point
+___________
+
+* This interface allows you to select a focal point which can effect how your image displays to visitors on the front-end.
+* If your images are cropped in some way to make them fit to a specific shape, then the focal point will define the centre point from which the image is cropped.
+* To set the focal point, simply a marquee around the most important element of the image.
+* If the feature is set up in your website, then on the front-end you will see the crop of this image focusing on your selection.

docs/editor_manual/new_pages/creating_body_content.rst

@@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
 Creating page body content
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-Wagtail supports a number of basic fields for creating content, as well as our unique Streamfield feature which allows you to construct complex layouts by combining these basic fields in any order.
+Wagtail supports a number of basic fields for creating content, as well as our unique StreamField feature which allows you to construct complex layouts by combining these basic fields in any order.
 
 ===========
-Streamfield
+StreamField
 ===========
 
-Streamfield allows you to create complex layouts of content on a page by combining a number of different arrangements of content, 'blocks', in any order.
+StreamField allows you to create complex layouts of content on a page by combining a number of different arrangements of content, 'blocks', in any order.
 
 .. image:: ../../_static/images/screen11_empty_streamfield.png
 
-When you first edit a page, you will be presented with the empty streamfield area, with the option to choose one of several block types. The block types on your website may be different from the screenshot here, but the principles are the same.
+When you first edit a page, you will be presented with the empty StreamField area, with the option to choose one of several block types. The block types on your website may be different from the screenshot here, but the principles are the same.
 
 Click the block type, and the options will disappear, revealing the entry field for that block.
 
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Below is a summary of what the different buttons represent:
 
 **Insert link / document:** Allows you to insert a link or a document into the rich text field. See Inserting links and Inserting documents for more details. See `Inserting links section <inserting_links.html>`.
 
-Adding further blocks in streamfield
+Adding further blocks in StreamField
 ==============================================
 
 .. image:: ../../_static/images/screen11.8_adding_new_blocks.png
@@ -74,14 +74,14 @@ Adding further blocks in streamfield
 * You'll then be presented once again with the different blocks from which you may choose.
 * You can cancel the addition of a new block by clicking the cross at the top of the block selection interface.
 
-Reordering and deleting content in streamfield
+Reordering and deleting content in StreamField
 ==============================================
 
 .. image:: ../../_static/images/screen11.9_streamfield_reordering.png
 
-* Click the arrows on the right-hand side of each block to move blocks up and down in the streamfield order of content.
+* Click the arrows on the right-hand side of each block to move blocks up and down in the StreamField order of content.
 * The blocks will be displayed in the front-end in the order that they are placed in this interface.
 * Click the rubbish bin on the far right to delete a field
 
 .. Warning::
-	Once a streamfield field is deleted it cannot be retrieved if the page has not been saved. Save your pages regularly so that if you acidentally delete a field you can reload the page to undo your latest edit.
+	Once a StreamField field is deleted it cannot be retrieved if the page has not been saved. Save your pages regularly so that if you acidentally delete a field you can reload the page to undo your latest edit.

docs/editor_manual/new_pages/the_promote_tab.rst

@@ -14,5 +14,3 @@ The second, *Promote*, is where you can set all the 'metadata' (data about data!
 
 .. Note::
 	You may see more fields than this in your promote tab. These are just the default fields, but you are free to add other fields to this section as necessary.
-
-..  ADD IN IMAGE OF PROMOTE TAB >>