From cf505d0ead480b000e724b416f16050be3b1027b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Wang Fang Date: Fri, 25 Dec 2020 11:46:41 +0800 Subject: [PATCH] docs: update the documents based on customer feedbacks --- docs/en/api-reference/protocols/icmp_echo.rst | 2 +- docs/en/get-started/windows-setup.rst | 2 +- docs/zh_CN/get-started/windows-setup.rst | 2 +- 3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/en/api-reference/protocols/icmp_echo.rst b/docs/en/api-reference/protocols/icmp_echo.rst index a6af18ee30..23e321cfe2 100644 --- a/docs/en/api-reference/protocols/icmp_echo.rst +++ b/docs/en/api-reference/protocols/icmp_echo.rst @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Example method to create a new ping session and register callbacks: struct addrinfo *res = NULL; memset(&hint, 0, sizeof(hint)); memset(&target_addr, 0, sizeof(target_addr)); - getaddrinfo("www.espressif.com", NULL, &hint, &res) == 0); + getaddrinfo("www.espressif.com", NULL, &hint, &res); struct in_addr addr4 = ((struct sockaddr_in *) (res->ai_addr))->sin_addr; inet_addr_to_ip4addr(ip_2_ip4(&target_addr), &addr4); freeaddrinfo(res); diff --git a/docs/en/get-started/windows-setup.rst b/docs/en/get-started/windows-setup.rst index 70d6d3b06d..80681cff1d 100644 --- a/docs/en/get-started/windows-setup.rst +++ b/docs/en/get-started/windows-setup.rst @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ https://dl.espressif.com/dl/esp-idf-tools-setup-2.3.exe The installer includes the cross-compilers, OpenOCD, CMake_ and Ninja_ build tool. The installer can also download and run installers for Python_ 3.7 and `Git For Windows`_ if they are not already installed on the computer. -The installer also offers to download one of the ESP-IDF release versions. Please choose a directory for downloading ESP-IDF. The recommended directory is ``%userprofile%\esp`` where ``%userprofile%`` is your home directory. If you do not have it yet, please run the following command to create a new one: +The installer also downloads one of the ESP-IDF release versions, or offers to use an existing one, if already present on your PC. If you don't have one, please choose a directory for downloading ESP-IDF. The recommended directory is ``%userprofile%\esp`` where ``%userprofile%`` is your home directory. If you do not have it yet, please run the following command to create a new one: .. code-block:: batch diff --git a/docs/zh_CN/get-started/windows-setup.rst b/docs/zh_CN/get-started/windows-setup.rst index f6aa68aae5..cf10960894 100644 --- a/docs/zh_CN/get-started/windows-setup.rst +++ b/docs/zh_CN/get-started/windows-setup.rst @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ https://dl.espressif.com/dl/esp-idf-tools-setup-2.3.exe 本安装器可为您安装所需的交叉编译器、OpenOCD、CMake_ 和 Ninja_ 编译工具。此外，本安装器还可在有需要时下载、运行 Python_ 3.7 和 `Git For Windows`_ 的安装器。 -本安装器还可用于下载任意 ESP-IDF 发布版本。推荐将 ESP-IDF 下载到 ``%userprofile%\esp`` 目录下，其中 ``%userprofile%`` 代表家目录。可运行以下命令，创建 ``%userprofile%\esp``。 +您可以使用之前已经下载的 ESP-IDF 版本，如果没有的话，本安装器还可用于下载任意 ESP-IDF 发布版本。推荐将 ESP-IDF 下载到 ``%userprofile%\esp`` 目录下，其中 ``%userprofile%`` 代表家目录。可运行以下命令，创建 ``%userprofile%\esp``。 .. code-block:: batch