From 7155a6c0d6451618d3bed8158a65d64b300e2464 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ryan Barrett <git@ryanb.org>
Date: Sat, 4 Feb 2023 19:10:39 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] minor tweaks to front page language

---
 templates/index.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/index.html b/templates/index.html
index 1e28732..aabd633 100644
--- a/templates/index.html
+++ b/templates/index.html
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
     \
       <img title="Mastodon" src="/oauth_dropins_static/mastodon_2x.png">
 </pre>
-<p class="big">You have a Mastodon account. You want to post on your web site, copy those posts to that account, and send responses back to your site.</p>
+<p class="big">You already have a Mastodon account. You want to post on your web site, copy those posts to that account, and send responses back to your site.</p>
 </a>
 </div>
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 
 <div class="row">
   <div class="big col-lg-6 col-lg-offset-3 col-md-12">
-    ...or create an account on <a href="https://micro.blog/">micro.blog</a> or <a href="https://joinmastodon.org/">Mastodon</a> to try out the <a href="https://fediverse.party/en/fediverse/">fediverse</a> first. <a href="https://indieweb.org/discuss">Ask us more in chat!</a>
+    ...or, if you just want to check out the <a href="https://fediverse.party/en/fediverse/">fediverse</a>, try <a href="https://micro.blog/">micro.blog</a> or <a href="https://joinmastodon.org/">Mastodon</a>. Or <a href="https://indieweb.org/discuss">ask us more in chat!</a>
   </div>
 </div>