From 1ee1fb0e8ff76155511cba7f26a60023bf9084ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ryan Barrett <git@ryanb.org>
Date: Fri, 29 Dec 2023 21:11:42 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] front page redesign: minor tweaks

---
 templates/index.html | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/index.html b/templates/index.html
index 972cdb2..a17adbb 100644
--- a/templates/index.html
+++ b/templates/index.html
@@ -19,25 +19,26 @@
 </div> <!-- front-form -->
 
 <div class="row big front-light">
-<p>Got a <span class="web">🌐 web</span> site? Enter it here to follow someone on the <a class="fediverse" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fediverse"><img src="/static/fediverse_logo.svg"> fediverse</a>:</p>
+<p>Got a <span class="web">🌐 web</span> site? Enter it here to follow someone on the <a class="fediverse" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fediverse"><img src="/static/fediverse_logo.svg"> fediverse</a>:
 <form method="post" action="/web-site">
-  <input required type="url" name="url" id="url" placeholder="snarfed.org" />
+  <input required type="url" name="url" id="url" placeholder="example.com" />
   <input type="submit" class="btn btn-default" value="Go" />
 </form>
+</p>
 </div>
 
 <div class="row big front-dark">
-<p>Got a <a class="fediverse" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fediverse"><img src="/static/fediverse_logo.svg"> fediverse</a> account? Follow the <span class="web">🌐 web</span> site <a class="handle" href="https://example.com/">example.com</a> by searching for <span class="handle">@example.com@web.brid.gy</span> in your fediverse instance.</p>
+<p>Got a <a class="fediverse" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fediverse"><img src="/static/fediverse_logo.svg"> fediverse</a> account? Follow any <span class="web">🌐 web</span> site, eg <a class="handle" href="https://example.com/">example.com</a>, by searching for <span class="handle">@example.com@web.brid.gy</span> in your fediverse instance.</p>
 </div>
 
 <div class="row big front-light">
-<p>Bridgy Fed connects many popular decentralized social networks. You can use it from one network to follow people on another, see their posts, and reply and like and repost like normal. All interactions work in both directions. <a href="/docs">See the docs for more info.</a></p>
+<p>Bridgy Fed connects some of the most popular decentralized social networks. You can use it from one network to follow people on another, see their posts, and reply and like and repost them. All interactions work in both directions. <a href="/docs">See the docs for more info.</a></p>
 </div>
 
 <!-- <p>Blocks, mutes, and other native moderation features work automatically. You can opt out of Bridgy Fed by adding <em>#nobridge</em> or <em>#nobots</em> to your bio or <a href="mailto:opt-out@brid.gy">by private email request</a>.</p> -->
 
 <div class="row big front-dark">
-<p>Bridgy Fed currently supports web sites and blogs and the <a href="https://enwp.org/fediverse">fediverse</a> via <a href="https://activitypub.rocks/">ActivityPub</a>. More networks like <a href="https://blueskyweb.xyz/">Bluesky</a>/<a href="https://atproto.com/">AT Protocol</a> and <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nostr">Nostr</a> are coming soon!</p>
+<p>Bridgy Fed currently supports web sites and blogs and the <a href="https://enwp.org/fediverse">fediverse</a> via <a href="https://activitypub.rocks/">ActivityPub</a>. <a href="https://blueskyweb.xyz/">Bluesky</a>/<a href="https://atproto.com/">AT Protocol</a> and <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nostr">Nostr</a> are planned for 2024.</p>
 </div>
 
 <div class="row big front-light">